Chapter 586 – My Billionaire Hubby Lives a Double Life Novel Free Online

Elizabeth noticed Derek’s ruse. “You want to have dinner with us just to spend more time alone with Natalie, don’t you? I told you yesterday to stop bothering her. She’s already married. Besides, discussing the final design is official business. We can discuss it here at the studio. There is no need to go out for dinner.”

Elizabeth opposed Derek’s whims.

“If I’m not mistaken, my order would be the first project you’ve ever made since returning to W Marks Studio. It doesn’t matter if you screw it up because you don’t care, right?” Derek then took the design draft and prepared to leave.

“Wait… Let’s have a casual meal around the studio after work if you really want to confirm the design. And that’s it.” Natalie stopped Derek, who was about to leave, with a helpless expression.

She knew Elizabeth didn’t want Derek to get his way because she was looking out for her friend. But Derek was right. This was the first order Elizabeth received after leaving the hospital. She must place a high value on it.

“Natalie,” Elizabeth said, tugging at Natalie’s sleeve. Her expression darkened.

After some thought, Natalie said, “It doesn’t matter. I’m not going alone with Derek. You’re here with me. Don’t worry.”

Derek was secretly pleased that his plan had worked.

As soon as the clock struck for the time to leave work, Derek drove the eye-catching Maserati to the studio, honked the car horn in a high-profile manner.

The attention of the passers-by were all drawn to him and kept looking back.

Draco, who was also off duty, met Natalie as she walked out of the studio.

Draco frowned. Noticing Derek’s apparent waiting for Natalie, he couldn’t help but ask coldly, “Why is Derek here? Is he bothering you again?”

“Not really…” Natalie looked down, embarrassed, and didn’t know what to say.

“Derek invited us out to dinner to discuss business. But don’t worry, Mr. Wesley. I will ensure Natalie’s safety.” Fortunately, Elizabeth came to break the awkward silence and explain.

Draco nodded and didn’t say anything else with a much softer expression on his face.

Elizabeth continued. “Mr. Wesley, we’ll leave now. Natalie, let’s get in the car.”

“Goodbye, Mr. Wesley.” Natalie addressed Draco politely, as she always did. Then she and Elizabeth got into Derek’s car.

Derek had booked a table at a fancy restaurant downtown inside a five-star hotel. Many people had gathered in the restaurant after work.

Derek pulled over to the side of the road and parked his Maserati. Natalie and Elizabeth then exited the car and walked to Derek’s side.

Elizabeth was standing tall and had a cold expression on her pretty face. On the other hand, Natalie looked pure and gentle. Her long hair was curly, and she was wearing a dress and a pink coat.

They were two different types of beauties who, along with a handsome man, drew a lot of attention.

Derek, of course, was aware of the onlookers’ attention. He didn’t care at all and even felt a sense of complacency. His ego was greatly satisfied by the envious gazes of the passers-by.

“Please keep your face expressionless. You’re really annoying.” Natalie couldn’t help but complain when she saw Derek’s smug expression.

Derek, like a true gentleman, opened the restaurant door for them. “Why? Can’t I smile? Natalie, you’re becoming increasingly cruel to me.”

He approached Natalie deliberately and snickered, “But it doesn’t matter. I like bad women.”

“You’re having fun being a playboy now. But you will be distressed if you meet your true love in the future.”

Natalie was certain that she would witness that day, since she had seen the same thing happen to Garrett.

Derek didn’t take it seriously. Squinting his eyes, he teased, “You’re already married. I don’t believe I’ll ever find true love.”

Natalie did not comment. They continued walking into the restaurant.

The waiter was very enthusiastic as he led them to their table.

Elizabeth smiled as she listened to them bickering. She removed her coat, pulled out a chair, and sat down. She spun around and peered out the window. “This place has a beautiful view.”

A dense ginkgo forest surrounded the restaurant.

“What would you ladies like to eat? Burritos and tacos are two of their signature dishes here.” Derek looked through the menu, introducing them to the famous dishes. He and his manager had visited this restaurant several times.

Since both Natalie and Elizabeth weren’t picky eaters, they let Derek order food for them. He then ordered some food and a bottle of the most expensive wine in the restaurant.

When Elizabeth noticed that the dinner had not yet been served, she took out a document and handed it to Natalie. “I’ve given Derek the draft. This is a copy. Derek, didn’t you say something was wrong with the design? What is it?”

Derek was rendered speechless. “Wait a minute. I’ll look at it again,” he said, pretending to cough slightly.

He expressed his thoughts on the design while checking the draft.

Natalie carefully recorded Derek’s opinions, so she didn’t notice that not far away, at two long tables, there were about seven Larson Group employees with their ID cards. The Larson Group had planned a welcome party for the newcomers, which took place in the same restaurant.

“Let’s order. This popular Mexican restaurant is somewhat expensive. Fortunately, today it’s the company’s treat. You are free to order whatever you want. The company will pay the bill.” A lively female employee was brightening the mood. She passed the menus to her colleagues.

Vivian thanked her and accepted the menu. She wasn’t interested in Mexican food, and she wasn’t interested in this party either.

She was only persuaded to come because she had the highest position among them. As the last additional member of the Larson Group, everyone saw her as a very mysterious person.

“Vivian, is there any particular dish you like? Let me help you order.” Many of her female colleagues were giving her special treatment.

“You hadn’t talk with us much since you came to the Larson Group. We’ll be working in the same department from now on, and we can get to know each other at this party.”

“Okay,” Vivian replied with a smile.

Another colleague suddenly said, “I didn’t expect that you were recruited by Mr. Larson himself. You are truly amazing. It seems that Mr. Larson has a soft spot for you.” “After all, Mr. Larson is usually cold and easily irritated. He’s only different and gentle with his wife,” a male colleague, who was interested in Vivian, added.

He thought that Vivian was really amazing. Among them, she had a mediocre education background and no work experience, but she could get a higher position than them. Vivian confidently raised her brows and smiled. This type of flattery pleased her. “I’m just lucky. Mr. Larson places a higher value on strength. I’m simply outstanding in this aspect.”

Vivian wanted to say more, but she noticed that the attention of her female colleagues who had been listening to her had shifted to something else.

“The woman sitting by the window looks like Natalie.” “It’s really Natalie! Oh my goodness! How could she date another man?”

The female employees exchanged stunned glances.


New Book: Beginning with a Daring Encounter

Celsie was tired of being labeled as an introvert, workaholic, and dull virgin by her friends. Determined to prove them wrong, she made a bet that she would do something daring on her 25th birthday. Now that the day had arrived, it was time to fulfill her promise. On her daring to-do list, there was one task: a one-night stand with someone.


79 responses to “Chapter 586 – My Billionaire Hubby Lives a Double Life Novel Free Online”

  1. Saranya Manoj Avatar
    Saranya Manoj

    Another problem for Natalie now… loved the way frank spoke… what will happen . Will Vivian make things about Derek… waiting for more …

  2. Myrhh Avatar
    Myrhh

    Vivian inside Larsin group is annoying…she had the laptop that charis used in purchasing the poison… Natalie still not behaving like a married woman esp. as CEO’s wife.

    The Larson group has design industry where she worked before. Why not she get it with Tiffany?? separated department but still Larson…for her to stand as CEOs wife…

    OMG, she prefers being employed by others, not helping her husband..She is also the White only daughter. How naughty she is.

    Maybe Vivian again will help Natalie on that ocassion which leads to Natalie’s gaining her sympathy.

    1. Anusha Avatar
      Anusha

      Well well well…. Look what the cat dragged in😂😂

  3. Giggle Avatar
    Giggle

    As expected ☹️

  4. Umi kalsom Avatar
    Umi kalsom

    Pls no more trouble for natalie and brandon already.too much already..its boring already.

    1. Chidinma Egwu Avatar
      Chidinma Egwu

      Exactly it’s getting boring there must always be a scandal. Why don’t Nathalie go work at the Larson design department where she use to work before. All this dragging is making the story boring.

  5. Max Avatar
    Max

    Truly disappointed, Larson group is treat like a small baby company and it’s all gone, now nobody show Brandon Larson a respect in meeting rooms. Same people were not dare to talk Infront of him and now give him lecture.
    When I say I want more and more chapters I did not mean I want Brandon low reputation ☹️ I love this novel because I love Sebastein Klein or Brandon Larson strong character in business world and in life.
    How could Garrett make fun of him. I felt Brandon helplessness. Is he really depend on Garret and charis. was he not remove Charis earlier, how much his business suffered at that time ?? It’s totally nonsense that Garrat and Charis are responsible of Larson Group success. It’s totally nonsense and foolish. I really feel bad for Brandon. I wish Sebastien Klein come back. Just because he lost his memory he is not able to handle his company as well.
    I hate Garrett now, I hate him a lot. I wish he dead.
    Natalie still that stupid.only destroy everything and sleep peacefully.
    Now with bastard Derek she enjoying her life without care.
    As already expected, Vivian princes get success in her plans. And how could employees link her with Brandon so early ??? He is soft with her🤢🤮🤢🤮 that totally nonsense and bullshits. Now Brandon may fakely frame with Vivian time to time.
    Vivian and Derek will work together to destroy Brandon Natalie relation??
    Natalie character is so irritating and annoying.
    Is Natalie ever care Brandon???
    Author I am disappointed with you. Sorry because the things are already expected😵🤯😖🥴🤢🤮

    1. Umi kalsom Avatar
      Umi kalsom

      Me too.im thinking of quit reading already.same scene as prevoius natalie making mistake and vivian take the opportunity to more closer to brandon.
      Pls author what a plot is this..too much dragging the chapter.should be happy moment natalie and brandon.
      I even skip this chapter as expecting what can be happened like previously.

  6. Kay Avatar
    Kay

    🙄it’s been years since Charis died according to the novel but Tasha is still pregnant 😅

    Anywho, since now it takes forever for Brandon to get his troubles in order, maybe it’s about time Sebastian Klein came back to the picture!

    Or even better, might as well end the novel! 🥱 clearly Brandon and his Company have lost their mojo, there’s no longer “double life of my billionaire hubby” anyways 😩

    1. Sheila Brown Avatar
      Sheila Brown

      My exact thought! Is he having an elephant?

  7. Susan Avatar
    Susan

    Vivian and her dirty plans!! I hope Brandon sees through her.
    Happy for Elizabeth

    More updates please

  8. Zoe Avatar
    Zoe

    Dear writer, can you make Natalie less annoying? I really don’t want to hate her. She’s ignorant and dumb. She said she’d bear the consequences but she just let Brandon deal with it all. Brandon’s sweet for not getting angry at Natalie. I can’t take this anymore! Please make her do less dumb stuff.
    I’m surprised she misunderstands him. She even had the nerve to ask if he’d kidnapped Lydia’s baby. Now when he told her to stay away from Vivian she didn’t want to listen to him at first. And now…she could have picked a restaurant instead of letting Derek doing it. And people are really annoying, jumping into conclusion… like seriously?! Everyone’s gonna think Brandon likes Vivian. Problem will come again. I know Brandon can deal with it. Natalie will be the trouble maker and I don’t even want to talk about Johanna who’s waiting to kick Brandon out.
    Also she better stops comparing Garrett with Derek. Garrett was never an annoying playboy who embarassed girls.
    Can someone slap Derek?! Seriously he’s such a pain! How can be a stubborn pig? Seriously. Only Brandon can teach him a lesson.
    I soooo loved reading about Frank & Elizabeth (please don’t bring a jealous nurse between them).
    I love Brandon’s planning for Vivian. Hope it works well. Please don’t have ridiculous rumours about Vivian and Brandon being together.
    And dear writer, please save Brandon.

  9. Divya bajaj Avatar
    Divya bajaj

    Happy for Frank and Elizabeth their love is blossoming.
    Did the employees not see Elizabeth with natelie in restaurant. are they blind?
    Vivian is getting successful in her plans but brandon and natelie will be cautious for her.

  10. Divya bajaj Avatar
    Divya bajaj

    Everyone make more than 100 comments to get the updates fast

  11. PRATIKSHA Avatar
    PRATIKSHA

    Why so much of mess…let’s give a happy ending soon

  12. Doe Avatar
    Doe

    I have doubt that Author of this novel is change and someone else took his/her place and write the remaining novel. I feel this because I read the chapters previously and I have that feeling and this feel more strongly now. A person who started this novel is may be no longer a writer of this novel.

  13. PRATIKSHA Avatar
    PRATIKSHA

    Why people always poke their nose in others business…I don’t understand…n who have this much free time for all these stuffs …

    1. Waty Avatar
      Waty

      Yes, boring, too many incident, already chapter 500+, I’ ve moving forward to another novel

  14. brandy Avatar
    brandy

    hope this ztiry doesn’t take another turn for the worse.

  15. Diana Avatar
    Diana

    These things are expected to be happen. We all were already predicted these upcoming, Brandon act so stupid and helpless, he personally called Vivian and then hire her 🤔😕🙄 his logic behind her hiring is totally stupid and not valid. Author need to think about it. Natalie never care about her husband, all she could do to mess around all his reputation and sleep peacefully without any care.
    Derek and Vivian two villain want to separate Brandon and Natalie. Now how far will they survive?
    Vivian already start to create rumor about her and Brandon relation and now miss stupid Natalie mess around Derek bastard.
    Charis playing all the tricks in past and always came clean in everything without create a doubt in Brandon mind and now Vivian did the same thing. How many chapters will she mess with our mind ???

  16. Weeba Avatar
    Weeba

    Now just only one thing left in novel that is ” Vivian Darling ” 🤢🤮
    Brandon truly lost his mind to offer her a job in Larson Group. Is he mad or what ?? I am highly disappointed🤬 and as you guys know Natalie always disappointed as so no need to add more words for her, she is useless.
    People already talk about Brandon Vivian affairs 🙄🤔🥴☹️🤯😖🤢🤮 what kind of stupidity is this ???
    I hate these chapters and the ways story is moving 😕😞😖🤢🤮🤬

  17. Umi kalsom Avatar
    Umi kalsom

    Me too.im thinking of quit reading already.same scene as prevoius natalie making mistake and vivian take the opportunity to more closer to brandon.
    Pls author what a plot is this..too much dragging the chapter.should be happy moment natalie and brandon.
    I even skip this chapter as expecting what can be happened like previously.

  18. Ning Avatar
    Ning

    Holy moley!!i really didn’t expect anymore dramas.for goodness sake,can we get this sorted out and have a happy ending.
    I never ever expected Natalie to be this silly so soon .any chance of her having a sense hammered into her head? the shits about Larson group has just died down and now instantly Natalie created one.jesus!
    Author come on!how many more of these chapters do you have for us.please no more trouble chapters for Natalie. Brandon needs a break from it.
    Can we please have a happy endings. Thanks for the updates.

  19. Miriam Avatar
    Miriam

    As expected whenever it comes to Natalie and other people. This is becoming increasingly annoying. I just hope I don’t give up on continuing to read this novel. Frank and Elizabeth’s episode was great though

  20. Ning Avatar
    Ning

    Btw ! Derek is too annoying that he caused too much problem here. Too much.
    Luckily,Elizabeth was there.
    Frank should get his fingers out and look for that antidote #save Brandon #your friend.
    Happy endings now please.thanks

  21. Lily Avatar
    Lily

    The longer the novel is, the nonsense and nonlogical it is. Seem like the author is running out of imagination and creation in her twists. You should open all of the bottlenecks and the novel comes to an end now!!!

  22. ANGEL ROSE Avatar

    Well, why is it that there are unnecessary things happening? Just to make this longer? Can we just go directly to Brandon and Natalie s concern please? Because together with the less important additional characters, the mission is delayed. I could feel that Brandon is restless and exhausted. He is just strong enough but that doesn’t mean to have such overuse for stupid cases.
    For Natalie, I hope there shall be no spreading of fake news against her. She and Brandon already had enough and we had already enough too. She is actually in a tightrope balancing in difficulty her career and being a wife. It’s not that easy for her since she always has a heart no matter how pressing the situation is.
    I just hope one day she will be returning back to Larson Group.

  23. ANGEL ROSE Avatar

    Vivian is very much confident. She doesn’t have a single idea how would Brandon might use this as his advantage. For those who expected Brandon to be outwitted for once, it is when pigs fly. I am very eager for this outcome and Brandon’s success. I admire his incredibility. When can we have Natalie’s pregnancy. Just make sure there will be no more problems, there children will be affected too.
    I love you all.
    By the way…
    I feel so inspired and happy for Frank and Elizabeth. Another two less lonely people!

    1. RR Avatar
      RR

      A hint of Natalie’s pregnancy… about her weight loss that Brandon mentioned!? Maybe 🤔

  24. Marlesher Avatar
    Marlesher

    Nother problem for natalie why count natalie an brandon live a happy live this is really getting boring

  25. Chloe Avatar
    Chloe

    Same boring stuff and not even a glimpse of things about to get better for Natalie and Brandon. I liked him better as Sebastian and Natalie is only a shadow of her former self. Get rid of Vivian and Derek ASAP. This story needs to pimp up and give the main characters the happy ending they deserve. You are loosing readers fast with this angle you’ve taken dear author, too much problems and villains…it’s killing your original good story.

    1. Florinda Avatar
      Florinda

      You are so right

  26. Sigrid P. Cadena Avatar
    Sigrid P. Cadena

    More please

  27. Stacy Avatar
    Stacy

    Thank you author, I’ ve enjoyed reading. Now it is saturated. Dumbing down characters. Dragging the same trouble like people don’t learn. No improvements.

  28. Efengo Avatar
    Efengo

    I really don’t like the turn out of events, I Lena how many plots in one story, merde

  29. Nancy Durant Avatar
    Nancy Durant

    Oh Vivian is going to hookup with Derek. This is so surreal.

    More chapters please……..

  30. Effie Avatar
    Effie

    Bad enough with 1 dim wit but making 2 dim wits! These ladies have their men. Knock Derek out of the story. This is about Brandon journey NOT DEREK!!!!!’

  31. Sabita Avatar
    Sabita

    I am assuming Brandon knows vivian is up to no good that is why he hired her, i cannot accept he is such an idiot to fall for the drama. So happy fir frank n glad elizabeth is with natalie at the dinner. God knows Natalie finds trouble every where she goes. Hoping Garrett does his due diligence and help brandon and the story comes to an end. I will move on to a different novel now.

  32. Brightest Avatar
    Brightest

    Am surprised that till now Natalie doesn’t have a car. Also she’s not behaving in her position as CEO’s wife.

  33. Kitty Avatar
    Kitty

    Smart move, Brandon. Keep your friends close and your enemies closer…by working at Larson, Brandon can keep a watchful eye on Vivian, and she will not know what hit her when it’s time for Brandon to strike.

    It doesn’t matter what Natalie does, she will always have a target on her back by merely being the most precious person in Brandon’s life. But their bond will always prevail over any adversity that are thrown their way. They are perfect for each other, Brandon will continue doing what he thinks is best, with cunning and ruthlessness, and devil may care attitude. Natalie is his most willing supporter, a perfect foil to prevent Brandon from losing his humanity in the process.

    1. RR Avatar
      RR

      I agree enemies closer…

      1. Ning Avatar
        Ning

        That’s exactly what Brandon is doing to Vivian. He just goes with the flow and let Vivian thinks that Brandon’s not aware of her motives. I don’t want to be in Vivian shoe’s when the sword fall on her.
        Smart move Brandon.

  34. Ning Avatar
    Ning

    As for Natalie, one minute she’s lucid, the next she’s off with the fairies. Not thinking that she’s married to Brandon. Get your act together Natalie please.there’s enough dramas as it is. Have pity on Brandon -your husband.He’s been through hell and back with all your dramas and immaturity. Stop being Selfish.
    Get her pregnant 3x it might inject sense into her.
    On Vivian, Derek and the wanna – be villains , i don’t care how they meet their punishments they need to be out of the pictures. The dramas and suspense is dragging on longer now.
    Please,
    Brandon and Natalie deserve their happy endings #save Brandon ” from his memory loss. Thank you.

  35. Mike Avatar
    Mike

    A big thank you to the author for this captivating story. And for all the readers, especially those who have commented here, we are all blessed to have found this book. The book’s story line, particularly the love story of Brandon and Natalie, has many stunning reminders about the triumph of love in the face of chaos and adversities of this world. For those readers who have expressed in the comments that they wished the book had followed their preferred story line or length. I guess I will just say that we should let the author be. Let the author tell their story as they wish.

    1. RR Avatar
      RR

      👏👏👏

  36. Vilma Avatar
    Vilma

    OMG! What happened to the story!

    1. Sabita Avatar
      Sabita

      I know the main characters have limited or guest appearances😄

  37. Carmy Avatar
    Carmy

    I just go with the flow..even if sometimes I hated to where the story will bring us. The writer knows best..and I hope it will be a happy ending.For all of us will be happy as well..😄😉

    1. Mike Avatar
      Mike

      Good sentiments. Thanks

  38. A Avatar
    A

    More please

  39. Riya Avatar
    Riya

    If Vivian spread fake rumors about her soft relationship with Brandon 🤢🤮 then it would be Natalie test to trust Brandon as he did when Draco and her pictures circulating on social media. Will she trust him as he trust her? Or another thing, when Charis entry happened and she revealed her love for Sebastein and make Natalie jealous then she burst into anger and hurt Sebastein a lot and fall sick as well so maybe this time we will also get some more moments like this.
    But honestly, Brandon Larson is a one-woman man and he love Natalie deeply. Because people are jealous from them they want to create all these rumors the self so that their relationship suffered and break. Because people are so envy and jealous of their pure love and always wish that Brandon stop loving her but he will never stop loving her Never.

  40. PRATIKSHA Avatar
    PRATIKSHA

    I think people will lose interest with these extra repetitive
    mess ..kindly put d novel to an end …

  41. Yolandi Avatar
    Yolandi

    Awwww Frank and Elizabeth am so happy for them,
    Derek,,,,Why is he being so selfish i do not like him at all,

    More chapters please

  42. Laura Avatar
    Laura

    It it me or doesn’t this author forget what novel it’s writing. Tasha still pregnant , we haven’t heard anything about Laney pregnancy. The author writes like Charisma died years ago. That’s impossible. Frank still hasn’t found the antidote for Brandon. It’s time that this author finishes each characters story and finish this novel. Very disappointed. Not sure if I would read another novel from this author.

  43. Laura Avatar
    Laura

    I want to read wheres garrison & Laney wedding, baby
    I want to read Frank found the antidote for Brandon,
    I want to read about Tasha & her baby maybe with new partner Derek.
    I want to read more about Frank & Elizabeth
    I want to read that the Turners found out the truth of Vivian.
    I want to see each characters stories come to an end.
    Tied of all Natalie’s dumbness. Tied of Brandon fixing all her mistakes & making him look weak in the Larson Group.

    1. Umi kalsom Avatar
      Umi kalsom

      Me too.

    2. Ina Marais Avatar
      Ina Marais

      Me too…. 586 chapters with lots of unresolved issues…. time for a new story…. keep it real and interesting….

  44. Kim Avatar
    Kim

    Dear author, don’t make same evil plot for Vivian as Charis..you are repeating the same plot. Boring..time and again Natalie with her gullible character. When is she going to be smart n cunning CEO’s wife…more chapters please

  45. Abby Avatar
    Abby

    Dear Writer
    You have only 2 colors of characters, very good or very bad, but life is not like that

  46. Judy Bothello Avatar
    Judy Bothello

    This Larson Group female staff are stupid or what can’t they see with Natalie even Elizabeth
    is there, even the Larson female staff want to slander their boss wife and Vivian just want one excuse to plot against Natalie, and Natalie is acting like a dump, please forward more chapter

  47. Ischelle Avatar

    Where is this novel going with all the enemies. Is it this way the novel will keep going. It’s too much know with all these malicious. All the actors from the beginning change in all different ways. every time new ones coming in. It’s time know the change for good

  48. Nikita Avatar
    Nikita

    More chapters please.
    Each and every time the story ends on a twist.
    I am curious to know wat happens next..

  49. natividad Avatar

    I hope next chapters will be nicer.

  50. Danielle Avatar
    Danielle

    Please author … can’t believe that we waited for updates and you give us that ?!? Derek again ? And Vivian again ?!? And Vivian getting what she want ?!? Married women can’t have a business dinner ?!? And Natalie is not alone … Please make Vivian and Derek fall in love now at the restaurant any and make them disappear .. how frustrating the novel became … please finish the story with a happy end … I think I am going to quit. It is way too long and for nothing because I am losing the interesting in reading it.

  51. Cuplik Avatar
    Cuplik

    not much different from the opinions of other readers, I started to feel bored reading this novel, it started going in circles. the same mistakes are made over and over again, Natalie, who used to be great and independent, is now like someone who looks weak and less intelligent, I’m sorry the writer often forgets details, such as Natalie’s bodyguard suddenly not being in the story, Hannah, etc. Keep up the enthusiasm, writer, you can become an even greater writer🙏 wish you all the best 🙏😍

  52. Queen Diongoli Bolou Tecy Avatar
    Queen Diongoli Bolou Tecy

    Let’s have positive feelings and thinking dear writer/author.
    It’s really becoming boring with these incessant attacks on a particular couple from the beginning
    of their relationship in the novel, while the others, who met themselves through Natalie/Sebastian are having real fun time. I mean why these series of accumulated problems and what are we learning or talking about? Pls the suspend is becoming too much and the updates are not fast coming with
    just ten chapters.
    Why not give kudos to them and let’s enjoy the novel to the end.

  53. Rita Avatar
    Rita

    Oh well

  54. Kimi Avatar
    Kimi

    This is a copy and paste of The Substitute Wife My Poor Husband Is A Billionaire. The only thing they’ve done is change the 2 names and the title. So all the begging to change how it’s written is a waste of time. Someone else said this earlier, so I checked it it’s true. It’s hard to find it free but it’s out there if you search for it.

  55. Hannah Avatar
    Hannah

    More pls

  56. Josephine Avatar
    Josephine

    I wish Nathalie could also join and help brandon with their business. So that Brandon will not be alone thinking and solving all over their problems. A little help will make us happy. Pls. Nathalie muss support Brandon’s business in case something happened to him she’s is preferred to run the business. I’m afraid that Vivian will take over the the Larson group in case Brandon get sick

  57. Bel Avatar
    Bel

    Vivian again? She can’t stop. Can Brandon black list Dereck already.! This’s an interesting piece. Thank you author and more chapters please,

  58. Lucy Avatar
    Lucy

    Thank you for the updates. Would like to read about Brandon getting his memory back and Natalie getting pregnant. Please update soon.

  59. A Avatar
    A

    Disappointed by these chapters, doesn’t seem true to characters.

  60. A Avatar
    A

    Brandon is not growing as a character. Disappointed

  61. Monica Strange Avatar
    Monica Strange

    More chapters please.

  62. Kate Avatar

    Please let more chapters in

  63. Judy Bothello Avatar
    Judy Bothello

    PLEASE FORWAD MORE CHAPTERS AND THANK YOU

  64. Umi kalsom Avatar
    Umi kalsom

    More pls

  65. Nancy Durant Avatar
    Nancy Durant

    More chapters.

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